Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Audience questions


Whom do you want to reach?
I think it would be great if I could write the article in such a way to reach anyone who might be interested in getting a hobby or is already in one but has no where to go for it.

What is your audience background? – Their education and their life experinces?
My audiences background could really be almost anything. I have seen a large number different backgrounds all into the same thing at HobbyTown.  I guess the the only real thing people must have in common would be that they are all looking fo rsomething to do with their free time.

What are their interests?
Their interests can vary from tinkering with moters to building model tanks form WWII or even just blowing things up.

Is there any demographic information that you should keep in mind?
The only demographic that comes to mind is that girls tend to not be into hobbies as much as the guys. This isn’t always the case however so keeping in mind that they are still there will probably be best while writing.

What political circumstances may affect their reading?
I cant think of any that would.

What does your audience already know?
Maybe nothing, maybe a lot, but I will try to inform everything to get everyone on the same page.

What does your audience need/ expect from you?
Information about HobbyTown and Information on what my angle will be.


What kind of response do you want?
I would like people to come into the store.

How can you appeal to your audience?
With personal stories and experiences.

Audience and Genre

Audience and Genre relate to each other because with out one it is hard to determine the other. If you know the genre of a piece of writing then you should be a general type of audience associated with that genre and from there you can go into more specific audiences and the same goes for audience. For example if you are writing some sort of business report your audience will most likely be your business or your boss. While if your audience is you parents you might be writing a letter or some other form of personal writing, this is not always true however.

Monday, June 27, 2011

Biodiversity Loss blog

I think that Church does a good job connecting the audience to her her topic. In doing this she gives them a reason to care about it since it directly affects their lives. In fact she uses statements like "we may lose many opportunities to develop medicines we need to survive." This sentence should make everyone who reads it care about her topic even if it it only a little. And to back this statement up she has examples of us losing medical material in the past that we can no longer get to show that it can happen again.

Who should care about HobbyTown?


I would think that everyone should care about HobbyTown. No matter who you are you can find something that interests you. I have seen whole families come into the store and all find something that they are interested in, father son teams come in for pinewood derby for scouts, grandfathers bring their grandchildren in to teach them about R/C plains, and even people who are just passing by come in and get caught in something they find interesting. HobbyTown is a place for people who want to be entertained.

Friday, June 24, 2011

Friday HW question

I believe that the angle that Holson was going for when writing this piece was the affects that the Movie Napoleon Dynamite had on the small town of Preston, and its inhabitants. In this piece she interviews many of the locals including some that were even part of the film such as the farmer who shot the cow. To gather all this information she went to a festival that was made in the honor of the movie and interviewed people there. I know this because it was referenced several times in it with experiences that she witnessed from the event.

Wednesday, June 22, 2011

Questions for contact

What do you want to find out?
I want to find out what draws people to the store. weather its convenience or even some deep loyalty they feel.


What is the primary goal of this oral history?
To try to determine what sets HobbyTown apart from other stores of the same nature.


1)     1)  How long have you been coming to HobbyTown (its been longer then I have been there for sure)?
2)     2)  What changes have you noticed about the store over the years?
3)      3) Why do you come here as opposed to other hobby shops?
4)      4) Are there things in the store that you would change if you could?
5)      5) What do you like most about Lee, the owner (a lot of people really like him, so it might be interesting to know why) ?
6)      6) Would you travel further  to get to HobbyTown if is move locations?

CONTACTS


Three people that I would conduct an oral history would be Lee, the owner, JW, the owner’s brother and longest employee, and Scott Hall, long time returning customer. My reasons for Lee should be pretty obvious, it’s his store and he knows almost everything that has gone on in it for the past 17 years. JW can give an interesting angle that isn't Lees. I think JW has much different views on a lot that goes on in the store, JW is more of an observer while Lee tries to take with everyone, I believe this can make for very different stories. I also wanted to choose someone who doesn’t work at HobbyTown, so I picked Scott Hall. Scott is one of the customers that I know by name because of frequent visits. I also happen to know where he lives, seeing him outside his house a few times in my neighborhood 

Negatives


There are a few flaws that I have noticed in HobbyTown, some affect the stores business First things that aren’t good for business, these would include almost any fad for elementary school kids, lack of roleplaying/ board games, and the return policy.
FADS
These just aren’t things that a store like HobbyTown sells well. Even when we get them before they become popular, which is rare. The store just ends up with buckets of silly bands, gogos, and other weird items most of which wouldn’t even sell if we were inside a school. The good news is I think Lee has also seen the error in buying these, but I thought that about 3 months ago and it happened again.
ROLEPLAYING/BOARD GAMES
I am probably biased on this subject since I work for one of the largest board game companies over the summer at conventions. But because of this I know a lot of people who would be willing customers for these products and they aren’t cheap, a lot of profit can be made here. Lee used to be into this territory years and years ago but didn’t do well then, things are different now though Roleplaying and board games are increasing at crazy rates and customers come in the store asking for them all the time.
RETURN POLICY
This may or may not be an issue but I have noticed a lot of dropped sales because of the return policy. Just last Sunday someone was going to buy $18 worth of High Current cable leads but with a no cash refund policy nothing was bought. I understand why this policy is in place though. It exsits to stop a lot of extra work that comes from refunds and while it does stop a lot of extra work it also slows down the business. 
(picture wont post) its a bucket of silly bands...that will never sell :(...)

Monday, June 20, 2011

Integration Writing


            When someone tells you that they are going into work you first thought isn’t usually that they are about to go have fun for the next 6-8 hours. Imagining them behind a desk or cash register taking calls and wishing that they weren’t there is probably a much more reasonable image to have of them. And like most people this was how I have viewed my work for the past couple of years. I work at HobbyTown USA, an R/C (Remote Control) hobby store; the reason I say R/C is because it is commonly confused with places like Hobby Lobby and Michaels which are traditional craft stores. I cannot think of one day when I didn’t want to go into work, however, I can also not think of a day at work which I didn’t enjoy.
                Waking up for a Saturday shift is about the earliest I will ever wake up for anything non-school related and even then it’s still only 9 that I wake up at in order to be there at 10. Upon entering the store I usually feel very odd because of the coldness of a concrete store in the morning with a lack of manmade light. The first few hours are slow and that is good because I am never awake until lunch. When there is no one else in the store I usually find myself sitting on some shelving behind the register, it is sturdy metal shelving that is usually used as a stepstool for the others but for me I want it to be nothing more than a place for me to rest. I know that I can’t stand for a whole shift so I sit when I can on my trusty shelf since there are no chairs or other places to sit in the store. The smells one smells while smelling in the store can very quiet heavily based on where you are, it can smell like grease and fuel, or even new shoes (we don’t sell shoes it just smells like it sometimes.)  The rest of the day can be described as customer service, phone calls and questions form the few customers we get and people complaining because they didn’t read the instructions on their $500 R/C car and broke it within the first 5 minutes of owning it. Stupid people aside most days go by without a hitch, and are over before I know it. Closing is almost as fast as opening but we have to vacuum and count the earnings, both take about 15 minutes to do since we split the work. Then I’m on my way home to rest my always tired feet.
A very common question that I get would be what is the most popular hobby? In the Article, “The World’s Greatest Hobby”, Katlynn D. (An employee of Hobbytown USA) talks about what her views are on the world’s greatest Hobby. This question doesn’t have a definite answer but Katlynn gives her opinion is such a way that it even convinces me of it. The point of the article isn’t to convince people that trains are the world’s greatest Hobby but rather to tell people about a large model train event.
Going back to that person who asks, what is the most popular hobby? In the past I would have answered them with observations that I had seen around the store, what was selling well and what people seemed to really enjoy.  However, the truth of the matter is that the rest of the world is a bit different then the small crowd of hobby enthusiasts in Louisville Kentucky. The statement that convinced me of this was, “Trains were the biggest mystery to me. I had never really learned much about them. My dad is a big R/C racer, my friends are gamers, I’ve built a few models, but trains were a complete blank.” This quote shows that the author until recently had little knowledge of how great the train hobby was just like me.
The reason this quote stands so much out to me is that it almost perfectly describes my own experiences, I have a friend who is a big R/C racer (who actually introduced me to my current boss), I have a group of friends who board game, I have built a few models, and trains are the one thing I know almost nothing about. This makes me want to look more into trains to find out what she learned that gave her such a great respect for trains when she is already into so many other hobbies.
While something titled “Traxxas to Sponsor Kyle Busch in Three NASCAR Truck Series Races”, might not sound like an article relating to my place I found an interesting connection within it. Kyle Busch, current NASCAR drive, is a former HobbyTown USA employee. And while he wasn’t an employee at my store I could easily relate with things said by him in an interview in this article.
In a lot of ways Kyle Busch makes me think of myself, not that I want to be a NASXAR driver.  “I worked at a hobby store in Las Vegas when I was a teenager and remember selling a lot of Traxxas vehicles and equipment. I’ve used the vehicles throughout my life because R/C cars have always been a huge passion of mine.” Like Kyle I find myself working for HobbyTown USA and also find R/C cars to be somewhat influential in my life, but in a moderately different way.
Instead of becoming sponsored by the R/C company that I have sold cars for, I have sometimes seen myself applying for a job there working on their electronics. While it might seem like a childish dream to want to join some big company fresh out of college I see no harm in trying for it. I have always had this feeling since Junior year of high school. That year I was struggling in physics and I also started working at HobbyTown, working there taught me all about electronics and how currents, amps, volts, and overall electronics worked. This surprising helped me in physics and when applying physics to my work actually made it somewhat fun. Having fun in a career is something that I have always been taught to seek so I have naturally grasped firm to the idea of working in the R/C world.
The first and my favorite thing that stands out about my workplace would be the environment. Being a small business and not having to abide by rules and protocols from some guy in an office miles away really give off a unique atmosphere in the building. It really doesn’t feel like I am an employee most of the time, it feels part of a club or even a family.
Something that also stands out about this workplace would be the downtime that one gets almost every workday. Being a specialty store there isn’t always customers in the store and some days there are more times without customers then with. This again makes the atmosphere very friendly with lots of time for the employees to get to know each other and relax. While working with some of the older employees a lot of stories get told during this time. These stories make it feel like I’m working with my grandfather who used to always tell stories but passed away a couple years back, so hearing stories given in the same manner always makes me think of him.
The Employees aren’t the only interesting people you will run into while at HobbyTown. The customers range from moms looking for last minute birthday gifts to the 65 year old professional R/C plane pilot. One of my favorite types of people who come in are the customers who return to tell you about the product they purchased. While this might sound annoying to most it is slightly different for me at least. In my line of work I cannot have personal experience with all of my products since most cost upwards of $100 so getting personal feedback from customers is interesting to me as well as beneficial to my work. When people come in and talk to me it always helps the day go by quicker as well because while it is fun to work in a toy store for adults being at home is something that just can’t be replaced.
However, because of the great comfort I feel when I am at home I have a hard time getting anything accomplished while there. It is a different story at work. At work I have plenty of downtime where I can be doing homework or working on one of my own personal projects. I would like to think that getting this job helped me get through high school because it taught me a lot about responsibility and gave me a place where I could concentrate. I really love my work and I can’t imagine working anywhere else, getting a real job is going to suck!

Annotation



1)
Katlynn D, “The World’s Greatest Hobby”, blog.hobbytown.com, HobbyTown
USA, 31 Aug. 2010. Web. 18 June 2011.
In the Article, “The World’s Greatest Hobby”, Katlynn D. (An employee of Hobbytown USA)  talks about what her views are on the world’s greatest Hobby. This question doesn’t have a definite answer but Katlynn gives her opinion is such a way that it even convinces me of it. The point of the article isn’t to convince people that trains are the world’s greatest Hobby but rather to tell people about a large model train event.
Someone walks into the store and asks, what is the most popular hobby? And in the past I would have answered them with observations that I had seen around the store, what was selling well and what people seemed to really enjoy.  However, the truth of the matter is that the rest of the world is a bit different then the small crowd of hobby enthusiasts in Louisville Kentucky. The statement that convinced me of this was, “Trains were the biggest mystery to me. I had never really learned much about them. My dad is a big R/C racer, my friends are gamers, I’ve built a few models, but trains were a complete blank.” This quote shows that the author until recently had little knowledge of how great the train hobby was just like me.
The reason this quote stands so much out to me is that it almost perfectly describes my own experiences, I have a friend who is a big R/C racer (who actually introduced me to my current boss), I have a group of friends who board game, I have built a few models, and trains are the one thing I know almost nothing about. This makes me want to look more into trains to find out what she learned that gave her such a great respect for trains when she is already into so many other hobbies.

2)
,“ sxsnews.com, Side x Side Industry News, 24 Aug. 2010, Web, 18 June 2011
While something titled “Traxxas to Sponsor Kyle Busch in Three NASCAR Truck Series Races”, might not sound like an article relating to my place I found an interesting connection within it. Kyle Busch, current NASCAR drive, is a former HobbyTown USA employee. And while he wasn’t an employee at my store I could easily relate with things said by him in an interview in this article.
In a lot of ways Kyle Busch makes me think of myself, not that I want to be a NASXAR driver.  “I worked at a hobby store in Las Vegas when I was a teenager and remember selling a lot of Traxxas vehicles and equipment. I’ve used the vehicles throughout my life because R/C cars have always been a huge passion of mine.” Like Kyle I find myself working for HobbyTown USA and also find R/C cars to be somewhat influential in my life, but in a moderately different way.
Instead of becoming sponsored by the R/C company that I have sold cars for, I have sometimes seen myself applying for a job there working on their electronics. While it might seem like a childish dream to want to join some big company fresh out of college I see no harm in trying for it. I have always had this feeling since Junior year of high school. That year I was struggling in physics and I also started working at HobbyTown, working there taught me all about electronics and how currents, amps, volts, and overall electronics worked. This surprising helped me in physics and when applying physics to my work actually made it somewhat fun. Having fun in a career is something that I have always been taught to seek so I have naturally grasped firm to the idea of working in the R/C world.

Friday, June 17, 2011

Closing Friday blog post

 Based on my current sources it should be pretty easy to incorporate them into my narrative. A lot of my sources are either people or peoples experiences. Since this is the case comparing their experiences to mine is the easiest way to put them into my narrative. I will also be looking up some history to give more background for my narrative.

"Black Men and Public Spaces"

In paragraph 12 Staples quotes from Podhoretzs "My Negro Problem- And Ours", you can tell that he took a direct quote from this because he put part of it in quotes, "special brand of paranoid touchiness". This quote is introduced by Staples by starting off the paragraph citing where he about to pull his quote from. He uses this quote to describe his own feelings and draws a connection between himself and this other authors writing. As for changing this passage i probably would not. Everything seems to be quoted correctly and it has a nice flow, you can easily tell what is Staples idea vs, who he is quoting and it leads him into his next couple of paragraphs nicely.

Monday, June 13, 2011

Research


Researching something about my place might be a little hard since my individual store doesn’t make much news. I can, however, research things that the whole franchise of HobbyTown has done.  I had heard once that HobbyTown had an interesting story behind its initial creation. I think I will probably look for this story since I cannot remember what it was about. I can always ask the owner again for the story but I am going to try to find it in print for a better reference.

EDIT: While I haven't found exactly what I am looking for i did stumble accross the offical HobbyTown Blog at http://blog.hobbytown.com/page/11/

Friday, June 10, 2011

Unit 1


My place

When someone tells you that they are going into work you first thought isn’t usually that they are about to go have fun for the next 6-8 hours. Imagining them behind a desk or cash register taking calls and wishing that they weren’t there is probably a much more reasonable image to have of them. And like most people this was how I have viewed my work for the past couple of years. I work at HobbyTown USA, an R/C (Remote Control) hobby store; the reason I say R/C is because it is commonly confused with places like Hobby Lobby and Michaels which are traditional craft stores. I cannot think of one day when I didn’t want to go into work, however, I can also not think of a day at work which I didn’t enjoy.
                Waking up for a Saturday shift is about the earliest I will ever wake up for anything non-school related and even then it’s still only 9 that I wake up at in order to be there at 10. Upon entering the store I usually feel very odd because of the coldness of a concrete store in the morning with a lack of manmade light. The first few hours are slow and that is good because I am never awake until lunch. When there is no one else in the store I usually find myself sitting on some shelving behind the register, it is sturdy metal shelving that is usually used as a stepstool for the others but for me I want it to be nothing more than a place for me to rest. I know that I can’t stand for a whole shift so I sit when I can on my trusty shelf since there are no chairs or other places to sit in the store. The smells one smells while smelling in the store can very quite heavily based on where you are, it can smell like grease and fuel, or even new shoes (we don’t sell shoes it just smells like it sometimes.)  The rest of the day can be described as customer service, phone calls and questions form the few customers we get and people complaining because they didn’t read the instructions on their $500 R/C car and broke it within the first 5 minutes of owning it. This is probably the worst part about my job, getting yelled at by ignorant people who think that good customer service is letting the customer walk all over you and get their way, when in fact they are wrong and there is nothing we can do for them. Stupid people aside most days go by without a hitch, and are over before I know it. Closing is almost as fast as opening but we have to vacuum and count the earnings, both take about 15 minutes to do since we split the work. Then I’m on my way home to rest my always tired feet.
                The first and my favorite thing that stands out about my workplace would be the environment. Being a small business and not having to abide by rules and protocols from some guy in an office miles away really give off a unique atmosphere in the building. It really doesn’t feel like I am an employee most of the time, but rather part of a club or even a family.
Something that also stands out about this workplace would be the downtime that one gets almost every workday. Being a specialty store there isn’t always customers in the store and some days there are more times without customers then with. This again makes the atmosphere very friendly with lots of time for the employees to get to know each other and relax. While working with some of the older employees a lot of stories get told during this time. These stories make it feel like I’m working with my grandfather who used to always tell stories but passed away a couple years back, so hearing stories given in the same manner always makes me think of him. The Employees aren’t the only interesting people you will run into while at HobbyTown. The customers range from moms looking for last minute birthday gifts to the 65 year old professional R/C plane pilot. One of my favorite types of people who come in are the customers who return to tell you about the product they purchased. While this might sound annoying to most it is slightly different for me at least. In my line of work I cannot have personal experience with all of my products since most cost upwards of $100 so getting personal feedback from customers is interesting to me as well as beneficial to my work. When people come in and talk to me it always helps the day go by quicker as well because while it is fun to work in a toy store for adults being at home is something that just can’t be replaced.
However, because of the great comfort I get when I am at home I have a hard time getting anything accomplished while there. It is a different story at work. At work I have plenty of downtime where I can be doing homework or working on one of my own personal projects. I would like to think that getting this job helped me get through high school because it taught me a lot about responsibility and gave me a place where I could concentrate. I really love my work and I can’t imagine working anywhere else, getting a real job is going to suck!
                                                         co-worker  Justine




Wednesday, June 8, 2011

Stone Horse

In Lopez's narrative "The Stone Horse" the part where he discribes all the differet types of vandalism to these archaeological sites really stands out to me. Before I would just think of vandalism of historical sites as being trashed and just stripped of anything valuable. But starting on page 298 paragraph 8 Lopez goes into detail about how these sites were vandalized. Lopez discribes two main types of vandalism in his narrative, the out right distructive kind and the proffesional thieves. The thieves took care to steal everything they could sell but rarly wasted time in destrutive acts where as the others just wanted to break stuff and even used vehicles to ram into these sites.

Monday, June 6, 2011

Personal Ascension

This last semester I had moved into a dorm room and for the first time let my home to live somewhere else. Having never lived without my family I learned a lot about living away from home. I learned things like how to make sure to meet every meal, and the importance of keeping being tidy. After the semester ended i moved back into my families house for the summer and received probably every question possible about living on your own form my 4 younger siblings. They asked if I was lonely, and if it was hard to be responsible for everything I did. By researching the place I have chosen as my place this summer I can learn a lot about something I previously had little knowledge about and thus ascend.

Plato, The Allegory of the Cave: Discussion

I believe what Plato was saying when he quoted Homer was that It is better to have a poor master when ones self is poor so that you can relate with one another and be able to have a relationship better then just master and servant. This is telling us to find places that we can fit into so that we can live happily, and understand those around us. I agree with this statement because I know from experience that it is hard to live with people who you have nothing in common with.

Friday, June 3, 2011

Brainstorming Unit 1

My primary concern about finding "my place" would be that I want it to be fairly close to where i live, hopefully within walking distance. The reason for this is that I have a car that gets about 10mpg so the trip downtown and back everyday is hurting my wallet without the extra trips. I could also find a place here on campus or near campus that i could visit while at school.
I have a few ideas about places around my home. I live right outside of Middletown and there are quite a few historical places there. There is also a forest near my house that is very interesting.

Hello World

Dear Readers (That is you),
My name is David Nilsen and I am from here, where I currently sit (Louisville, KY), and I will probably end up staying here forever. I do however really enjoy the west whenever I visit, which is quite frequent, so if i find myself with an opportunity to move I will probably take it (unless its CA, not a place I fancy living).

I Have never considered myself a "good writer", but I can write what I must when the need arises. Apart from classwork I have written many yearbook articles for my high school as well one personal creative writing piece just to see if I could write a short novel, I do not think it was anything worth attention though (which is odd because i am bringing it up now).

My personal definition of "place" would be a location that you can go to physically or even mentally. It could be on this world, in your mind, or even in "virtual space" in technology.